1) Too little media theory, thus you could define music videos as "visual poems" (Sven F Carlsson)
2) And another definition you could reference: Goodwin: music videos are "post modern texts" or "dreams". This may be a good introduction which applies to your music video.
3)Slide on Genre: Change heading to "Music videos demonstrate genre characteristics" (Goodwin) . ..Then go on with your evaluation which is excellent in this section.
4) Narrative: Remove final paragraph which is a bit woolly and instead say how you developed the convention of colour alteration, for example real time is in black and white whilst the sequences in high colour indicating some kind of acid trip by increasing the colour grading........
5) Your slide on the relationship between lyrics and visuals...Start sentence with I used the convention of music videos by illustrating the lyrics with the visuals and so on....
6) Music videos have inter textual references (Gopodwin) at beginning of section on the reference to Millais' "Ophelia" then continue with your evaluation on this reference.
Sam this is potentially a 20/20 A* response if you can manage the revisions I suggest which more strongly reference the question.
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2) And another definition you could reference: Goodwin: music videos are "post modern texts" or "dreams". This may be a good introduction which applies to your music video.
3)Slide on Genre: Change heading to "Music videos demonstrate genre characteristics" (Goodwin)
. ..Then go on with your evaluation which is excellent in this section.
4) Narrative: Remove final paragraph which is a bit woolly and instead say how you developed the convention of colour alteration, for example real time is in black and white whilst the sequences in high colour indicating some kind of acid trip by increasing the colour grading........
5) Your slide on the relationship between lyrics and visuals...Start sentence with I used the convention of music videos by illustrating the lyrics with the visuals and so on....
6) Music videos have inter textual references (Gopodwin) at beginning of section on the reference to Millais' "Ophelia" then continue with your evaluation on this reference.
Sam this is potentially a 20/20 A* response if you can manage the revisions I suggest which more strongly reference the question.